Ah, it's been too long since I've read something you've written.
This is absolutely perfect. I feel as though every single words helps the reader to understand what it is the writer (you, :P) is feeling and experiencing. Your vocabulary is fabulous, and you have done a wonderful job creating visuals for the readers.
You've come so far since I've started reading your work. You should certainly be proud of yourself.
The world stands stagnant today
as we remember a genuine soul
who gifted happiness to many,
as well as abundant adoration
despite terrorizing obstacles.
This stanza grabs the readers attention from the start.
Apple cinnamon candles glow,
infusing the air with your memory,
as we reminisce the beauty of your soul,
now in the comforting hands of God above.
Therapeutic memories cure our pain.
It is so hard to think of someone we love going before us. Some can find comfort knowing that this person is in a better place. Memories always haunt me and the pain has never left. Beautiful words Temps.
Violet petals of lilacs decorate
velvet landscapes surrounding us,
as birds dance to the song
of your illustrious vitality,
chirping your name with delight.
This stanza is so breath taking. I love lilacs they are so beautiful and their aroma is intoxecating. Awesome imagery!
Kaleidoscopic rays illuminate
our lachrymose eyes of sorrow.
Your absence we wish to erase,
yet know you still reside permenently
in our hearts, and in heaven.
It is so hard to let go of a loved one. How true they stay in your heart and mind. What a beautiful tribute to the person you penned this for.