Set Free-(Musette)

by End Of Eternity   Jan 12, 2010


Someone
Inside me breathes
To run

Control
Captured Freedom
My soul

Set Free
Hopeful wonder
Last plea

Written By: End Of Eternity

The Musette, created by Emily Romano is a poem that consists of three verses of three lines each. The first lines have two syllables; the second lines have four syllables, and the third lines have two syllables. The rhyme scheme is a/b/a for the first verse; c/d/c for the second verse, and e/f/e for the third verse. The title should reflect the poem's content.

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  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    You have shown time and time again that your tallent for writing is up there with the best.I do not know this form of writing but like Cindy's musette, you've done a wonderful job with it.The depth of the meaning of these words are quite clear.
    Keep up the great work my friend.An enjoyable read.
    Paul...

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a powerful punch of feeling in sucha short form.

    Great job with the way it makes the reader feel....the imagery it creates.

    Well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I think you meant to say "hopeful wonder" -- other than that very nicely done, each Musette I read is wonderful & accomplishes the challenge. Such few words but have a lot of meaning packed within them. Nicely done .

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nice job Nitin. I think we all have that someone inside that wants to run free.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Awesome... you have done a great job with this form Nitin, and expressed the desire for freedom so well. Loved the opening stanza especially...

    "Someone
    Inside me breathes
    To run"

    Fantastic.

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