Nostalgia Lingers. [Naani]

by Courageous Dreamer   Jan 24, 2010


Loneliness drizzles
from aquatic eyes.
nostalgia lingers-
as I yearn for you; my love.

*Naani means an expression of one and all.
It consists of 4 lines, total of 20 to 25 syllables. Generally it depends upon human relations and current statements.

*Thank you Samia for introducing this form.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautiful word choice. Nice job on this form!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Temps
    Beautifully penned. Wonderful form.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Loneliness drizzles
    Aquatic eyes

    Loved those lines. It gives a touching image.
    Liked the form too..well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Fantastic Temps... Love the form that you have so well penned... :) Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This would indeed be an accurate way to describe how being without the significant other can affect you...loneliness drizzling from aquatic eyes..very well put, Temps. This kind of grief can drag you down to the depths of hell, if you don't fight it.

    You were always popular on this site, but I feel you are now beginning to really blossom with your poetic skills:)

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

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