PErFecT

by Danielle   Jun 16, 2004


I put on this fake smile
Pretending life is fine
Walking through the streets
A frown you will not find
But when I go home
Everything will change
My life is a hell whole
I’m the one to blame
I hear them screaming
Awful things in here
Echoing though these firey walls
They trigger so much fear
I put on this fake act
For every one to see
I have a great life
A perfect family
A perfect little girl
With a perfect life
The perfect future
And the perfect knife
The perfect suicide note
Explaining to all
She wasn’t perfect.
Not perfect at all.

not even close to one of my best. I know! Don't be too hurtful on me! :(

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Lol good poem though even if it wasn't your best it was still amazing!
    ---tara

  • 18 years ago

    by Trevor H

    its like my poem Prison of Sadness, but better. i love this so much.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Great ending. I was wondering if you meant to use the wrong "hole" in the line "My life is a hell whole". Because I suppose that could be a pun, but I'm not sure if you just made a mistake or not. Good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure


    I love this poem. I can so totally relate! My God, so good!

  • 19 years ago

    by Emily Strickland

    Very Nice Poem. I Know Exactly How That Feels To Be So Depressed And Have To Pretend To Be Happy. Nice Job. Keep Writing. Your Very Talented.

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