Promises of Yesterday. [Collab]

by Courageous Dreamer   Feb 6, 2010


Butterflies have temporarily ceased-
due to your absence.
they no longer titillate desires...
their wings immobilized by loneliness.

Air filled with toxic abandon-
emotions that once ran blissful
Disabled: thick with cravings..
that gave me flight

Passion, need, intensify solitude-
as lachrymose eyes speak I love you.
Skating along the cliff of insanity...
my heart whispers I miss you.

Delicate threads of hope aspire-
tethered from the heart,
kissed by possibilities, fired
by promises of yesterday

Collab with Dressed in Love:
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1142089

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  • 14 years ago

    by Dark Shadows

    Delicate threads of hope aspire-
    tethered from the heart,
    kissed by possibilities, fired
    by promises of yesterday

    Beautiful lines

  • 14 years ago

    by Su

    Beautiful

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    ‘Butterflies have temporarily ceased-‘

    I like the usage of words here, to see the colors of
    life which freely roam just suddenly stop beautiful line.

    `emotions that once ran blissful
    Disabled: thick with cravings..
    that gave me flight’

    This is another one I like the description about emotion is
    very well penned.

    A good job done by you ladies!

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I love this. "Butterflies have temporarily ceased-
    due to your absence.
    they no longer titillate desires...
    their wings immobilized by loneliness."
    great job :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nice collab. The first two lines sound just a little awkward but all in all the message comes through, longing for a love that is not be be. Well done.

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