by SheenaMarie Feb 8, 2010
category :
Life, society /
other
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The drugs, the sex, the alcohol, and freedom, |
by Jenn
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WoW I really loved this It was Great!! |
by trippetta TC
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Your poem gave me chills, I can relate to the addiction part and the constant cravings that it causes. Very cathartic and hauntingly honest. |
by heartless
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It shows true emotion and it makes the reader feel like they are there watching what is going on, like they can stop it but not before its to late. |
by Ixora
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This poem is filled with understanding and pain. At the same time it seems like the narrator wishes the other had been stronger. Great imagery and choice of wording. |
by Mello193
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This is really sad, a little hard to follow at times, but really emotional, you should fix up the order and flow a bit...overall very nice |