Poetise Thoughts

by Sourav   Feb 26, 2010


Golden hue of an immortal sun
Flying clouds on the canvas of sky
Birds fly in the freedom of fun
A treat to watch - a gift to eye

Green grass, covered by morning dew
Trees dance in tune of naughty breeze
A smiling rose does all delight renew
Quiet moist earth is at absolute ease

A perfect scenario for two lovers young
As nature creates a soft romantic stage
Lost in each other - emotionally clung
Slowly they break the lawful cage

All the earth and air, beauty so profound
Awaken the soul of a poet hidden in deep
Now I can feel the aura, hear the sound
My spirit awakens from the defiant sleep.

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  • 13 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    This poem is a-mazing ! it's a combination of nature, love and freedom - awakening ! LOVELY!

  • 13 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    This poem is a-mazing ! it's a combination of nature, love and freedom - awakening ! LOVELY!

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Green grass, covered by morning dew
    Trees dance in tune of naughty breeze
    A smiling rose does all delight renew
    Quiet moist earth is at absolute ease

    This is such a beautiful picture of nature you
    have painted with words, it makes the heart
    smile..a warm and pleasurable read :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I loved the imagery in this & the unique descriptions - very unique descriptions, some I've never heard. Very nice!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    All the earth and air, beauty so profound
    Awaken the soul of a poet hidden in deep
    Now I can feel the aura, hear the sound
    My spirit awakens from the defiant sleep.

    ^^ with such beauty around indeed our souls will awaken... loved the beautiful imagery here...
    well penned.

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