Suffocate

Very empowering. i love how you said you would rather die so you can breathe again. that struck me deep. Lovely job.

victoria

I like how you used the word suffocate, of all words to choose from you really have great wording and i like that I enjoy having the option to turn to your writing when I am in need!
THanks for sharing, your writing is amazing!

Wow man that is really awesome , and you are so going into my fav. authors. ^_^

Life can really suck the air out of us & so can the people around us..a deep & meaningful write..good work :)

Very interesting, thoughtprovoking write....that is very well penned :) Your poems always captivate! Lol.

This piece is strong and intense. I loved it, especially theses lines...

"Hold me down and force your lies
Choke the truth with your disguise
I'll hold my breath from your fate
I would rather suffocate"

A powerful write. Well done :)