I like to be brief and conceptual..wont write u a magazine. but seriously this poem is unique with its words choice.. with its images...with the sadness and the darkness...so much harmony I felt between ur lines.
This As if slain by the arcane clouds,
arc of rainbow no longer
appears over this green meadow >>>must be the one that made me think for seconds b4 i continue reading, think about personal things..
thnx for sharing
u have the talent