Grief (Diamante)

by Sylvia   May 5, 2010


--------------Grief
-------horrific, repugnant
suffering, distressing, upsetting
anguish, heartache, hope, relief
-----rejoicing, jollity, inspiring
-------uplifting, happiness
----------------Joy

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A Diamante is a seven-lined contrast poem set up in a diamond shape. The first line begins with a noun/subject, and second line contains two adjectives that describe the beginning noun. The third line contains three words ending in -ing relating to the noun/subject. The forth line contains two words that describe the noun/subject and two that describe the closing synonym/antonym. If using an antonym for the ending, this is where the shift should occur. In the fifth line are three more -ing words describing the ending antonym/synonym, and the sixth are two more adjectives describing the ending antonym/synonym. The last line ends with the first noun's antonym or synonym.

To make it a bit simpler, here is a diagram.

Line 1: Noun or subject
Line 2: Two Adjectives describing the first noun/subject
Line 3: Three -ing words describing the first noun/subject
Line 4: Four words: two about the first noun/subject, two about the antonym/synonym
Line 5: Three -ing words about the antonym/synonym
Line 6: Two adjectives describing the antonym/synonym
Line 7: Antonym/synonym for the subject

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  • 13 years ago

    by anand singh

    There a silver lining at the end of every storm and this beautiful piece reminded me of this.
    The way you make the transition to the joy at the end is absolutely wonderful.
    An enjoyable read...
    Paul...

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    An interesting form and I like the way you went from grief to joy..you described the feelings very well..good job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    All these words describe grief in a different way; I like this form because the ending is an antonym which leaves the reader on a positive note. Nicely done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    Sylvia you have done a good job with the form and I really liked it. Good job and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful trasition from grief to joy... at the end it made me smile :)
    well written Sylvia :)