Live

by Hallucinostic   Jul 8, 2010


Keep your distance away from the razor.
You don't really want to do this, I know.
Shed all tears, shed out time, seek the meaning.
A child, though a wayward, has a right here to stay.

The world did hurt you.
Scars and burns tell no lie.
And it's harder to heal the wounds within.
The ghost still haunts you.
For the years and the tears you did hide.
But they don't know it.
Make them all know it.
LIVE.

If in the morrow there's still sorrow, I will be there.
I don't mind if he saves some for me.
I'll be your candle even if the night goes on forever.
The road before us, we will clear it somehow.

The world did hurt you.
Scars and burns tell no lie
And it's harder to heal the wounds within.
The ghost still haunts you.
For the years and the tears you did hide.
But they don't know it.
We'll make them all know it.
We'll LIVE.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    You say so much in your poems that hit home for many. Wicked cool song if you put it to music. Well done as always my friend
    Connie

  • 14 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow! this is awesome, amazing, fantastic take your pick! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Decayed

    This is magnificent.
    The beam of hope after each and every dark stanza is quiet worthwhile.
    You penned this !!

  • 14 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    ****The world did hurt you.
    Scars and burns tell no lie.
    And it's harder to heal the wounds within.
    The ghost still haunts you.
    For the years and the tears you did hide.
    But they don't know it.
    Make them all know it.
    LIVE.*****

    Okay you say that I'm talented but this is wow your way talented this right here is like a strength for me because i struggled with cutting for 6 years burning and almost killing myself... and to me it kinda says i know you have been through hell and so have I but you got to get past it and live i can relate so much and just how you worded this is amazing this is going in my favorits well done 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Phoenix

    Wow, that hurts so good. A strike right through the soul of depression. I voted 5/5. Amazing and powerful

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