Why

So deep and i can feel emotion in every words. Great job. What else can i say??

I like the title because it's really eye-catching. Evereybody has these moments when they're just asking why things are happening to them, the way they do or at all. It reminds the reader that the situation your poem will refer to is similar to one they've been in themself.
I like that you started the poem the way you did because time passing by is a really usual thing, which daily happens, so seems your heart beating slow to have become something usual. I think that's already really strong because usually special people that mean a lot to you will be able to increase the hearts pace, but obviously love either took that person from you or never gave you the possibility to meet them.
I like the use of repetition in this poem because it underlines the speakers frustration really well and the conclusion you came to, I didn't see that coming. I thought that this is a really well written, heartfelt and absolutely sad poem.

As heartrending as this is it is still amazing! Fantastic job, and so well written!

This is really good...I could defiantly relate to this.

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i love it so expressive poem
it just true and it shows how you really feel
nice write