Can We Break It?

by Hallucinostic   Apr 12, 2011


I need more time,
I'm drifting out of line.
Tell me, can we break it?
I want to leave this life of hatred.

Losing this game,
but who's to blame?
Tell me, can we break it?
I want to leave this life of hatred.
We try, try, try,
but somehow, we don't seem to get there.

Limitless trying,
accompanied by crying.
Tell me, can we break it?
I want to leave this life of hatred.

Was it etched on my name?
Or burnt by flame?
Tell me, can we break it?
I want to leave this life of hatred.
We try, try, try,
but somehow, we don't seem to get there.

The more I know,
I'm becoming less, it seems so.
Tell me, can we break it?
I want to leave this life of hatred.

All the same sins.
They're making me lose my senses!
Tell me, can we break it?
I want to leave this life of hatred.
We try, try, try,
but somehow, we don't seem to get there.

I don't want to hate, no more.
But is it something I can live without?
I want to hate no more.
It seems a waste of lifetime.
I'll hate no more, no more...
But tell me, can we break it?

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  • 13 years ago

    by flaredhyz

    I like the repeating lines. Is that a song?? when i read it, i feel like i'm singing :D

  • 14 years ago

    by Decayed

    Dib, this was amazing.

    I can feel the rhythm! :)

    And it's like a song! cool..

  • 14 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem, I enjoyed reading it. The wording was great and it flowed nicely.

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Amreen

    Nice piece..keep it up..:))

  • 14 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Did i mention how very talented you are?
    welp, your veryy talented! i love your work.
    i love your words, i love how everything i can relate too!
    your so very amazing :) 5/5

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