Angels Face

by Karl Wild GG23   Jul 9, 2010


**Read slow and preferably aloud**

Wish we had the world and all its time,
Stealing hearts should be a crime.
We'll lay together, count the stars,
Name them all, pretend they're ours.
You're the one I want by my side,
When suns rise above the tide.
Need you more than my next breath,
Lonely nights, worse than death.
Searched for you in broken dreams,
Sailed my heart down hopeless streams.
Hold my hand we'll take it slow,
Leave our footprints in the snow.
Pave a road the world can follow,
Slaves to lies and hopes of hollow.
Memorized the lines to your heart,
With wishes to one day get the part.
For, girl, I've loved you everyday,
Tell me please won't you stay.

When clouds block the summer sun,
Your smile as bright will make them run.
The pain of distance is my sorrow,
Nightmares still return tomorrow.
If this day should be our last,
I'll live my future in the past.
Your face is all my mind will see,
Asking forever on bended knee.
Butterflies turn my stomach to knot,
You promised forever, I never forgot.
Your heart is safe if you hide its hope,
Hang your dreams with noosed rope.
Lonely tears fill precious eyes,
Oh how I could die when she cries.
If somehow I passed at 11:11,
I'd wish "God send me back to heaven".
Leave me at my favorite place,
Where I can see my Angels Face.

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  • 14 years ago

    by mira

    Very beatiful poem karl
    this feelings are so true and sensetive i lika the last part

  • 15 years ago

    by danielle

    Omg wow i totally love this poem it was excellent!!! so sweet your really good at this keep up the good work 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    It was so damn great couldn't be more perfect , but who felt so much pain n' passed so sh!ty moments can't write something like this beauty cause the pain they feel is deeper than the words can bring on the lines , n' that means
    10\10 am glad u done such a great job e

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    Karl, this is an excellent write. I loved your line about counting the stars. I wouldn't think twice about making the suggested corrections. It's perfect just the way it is. Good work, man.

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Wow. I am definitely adding you to my favorites. You write such beautiful poems. I loved how you put in the 11:11 wishing that is very cool. My friend and I do that all the time. This poem gave me goose bumps :) The only spot I saw that was confusing was:

    When suns rise above the tide.

    suns?? another world? I think you meant:

    When sun rises above the tide.

    But thats all. I read it slowly and aloud as you asked and it really hit me.

    I couldn't choose which line I liked better the 11:11 one or this one:

    Your heart is safe if you hide its hope,
    Hang your dreams with noosed rope.

    Great job 5/5

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