Pouring Images

by Sunshine   Aug 18, 2010


As bright lights went off, waiting for a wild midnight
that takes nonreturnable parts of my heavy mind
slave to ones heart, trapped to bitter memories
alone with this sour bond of my untold stories

Night feeds me darkness, though mine already hurt
with pouring images like heavy rain yet with dirt
amid breezes too cold to warm, too hot not to burn.
Abiding between falling walls. Where shall I turn ?

Gazing to the reality of this sky, nothing seems to be..
stars shining brighter as more thoughts penetrate me
It's hard moments like this, when spirits decide to die
but my empty vessels sober, as my tears lift me up
with sighs; this is the difference between them & I ..

By: Rania Moallem

*unlike many I decide to fight my sadness to my last breath..that's all about this.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    First, the title is an excellent choice

    and this pace between midnight & mind (though they dont rhyme) is captivating!

    I liked it so much. The atmosphere is just gloomy +

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nana
    There is always hope at the end of the day. I think many of us just blind ourselves to it.
    So much sad lonliness in your words.
    Good job!
    Take care
    Love Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    What I admire about you, Nana, is that you share your feelings of sadness without feeling sorry for yourself and it such a way it allows people who read it to somehow find comfort in what you write. Sadness is something that is so heavy on the mind, and knowing the sun is still there is something you can know, but not feel at those moments.

    It takes a lot of inner strength to keep fighting for your own happiness, but I know you can do it...and you will pull it off:)

    Where shall I turn ?

    ^^
    This question in the second stanza really got to me, it is so sad to know how lonesome you feel:(

    Keep the faith, hun

    Well done

    * hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This dark poem hit the mark with its imagery yet it is so beautifuly written

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    A very good poem. Showing the writers true feelings known and the emotions come forth really good as well. I could feel them in every line. Good job and keep writing.

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