Yearnings of imprisoned eyes

by Sunshine   Aug 29, 2010


On either sides of the window lie
long streets of lights, where life
passes by..
gazing where the air smells real
& where the dusk quiver till the
sun disappears..

where all the roads meet the sky
& where through the crowd my eyes
run by
there have been everybody-except " I "
through the breeze that blows forever
little trees dance along, as colorful
leafs fall & shiver

where the noises break the sharp
silence..where people voices make
a beautiful tense
where life makes completely a wider
meaningful sense..

there as the night darkens early
fun rests while, love echoes cheerily
through the yearnings of my eyes,
I can see journeys winding clearly

on either sides of the window lie
different images of people passing by
gazing where my lonesome can't go near
my eyes shiver till the lights of the streets
disappear

By : Rania Moallem

******contest :
You are unable to leave your home or go outdoors...the only view you have of the outside world is the view from your window......Write a poem about how you view the world looking out of your window...

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  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I loved this poem a lot & thought you definitely met the challenge. I've read it several times & have loved it even more each & every time...You did an excellent job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I liked the title and the feelings of frustration, yearnings & sadness this write captured..well done with this write dear :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    SunShine,

    Excellent write !!! you did a great job expressing the way it must be imprisoned behind a window not being able to get out and enjoy the world.

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I just cannot express how impressed I am. I would have to borrow from the master to comment on this how may I speak of beauty lest she be the weaver of my speech. To say anything less could not even come close to the praise this poem deserves. The lines flowed within their selves and the rhyme was so subtle that only a fool could think anything here was forced...how inspiring!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by chind

    Another amazing piece. I love your writing, it always creates such vivid images. :D

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