The last drink

by Phantom Lord   Sep 2, 2010


Goodbye my friend
you have to go
Caused more pain
then you'll ever know

Promised the world
then crushed my dreams
Left me in a world
Where nothing is as it seems

I'll keep fighting
Until you are gone
I'll get healthy
And see a new dawn

No longer will I hurt
No longer will I bleed
So goodbye my friend
I'm finally free

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  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This has hit me harder than you probably will ever know. i know someone who is dealing with having his last drink and it's a struggle everyday.

    wonderful poem!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow this is amazing how I relate right now and a lot from a long time ago,,,u are a great poet I loved it greatly fantastically wonderfully done splendid work 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This poem was gd just nto flowing as the ones i commented b4..and i guess you are talking about getting over alcoholism ? or maybe am totally wrong

    and in both cases i did like the word choice and the PErsonal choice as well.
    gd job
    5/5

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