Lovesick

Wow! I really love this poem... It's so heartfelt and deep... I could sense what you're feeling and also relate... Very well done! Great job!

You've have painted a vivid picture of romantic desire and longing with your words. Definitely a cause for insomnia! Great read.

Anthony, well said, love is a very popular topic but not easily worded. you have done so ...

OMG Anthony another brilliant poem by you or what.. I found this just refreshing u knw..so much emotions been penned down in a very very very unique way,,,

you have a pretty gd way wen u want to play with words and describe images in ur head.. a talent to admire over here..

I think this is my fav so far by u..enjoyed reading it

5/5

What a great job. You have penned a great poem here. Your feelings for this person come across so clearly and distinctly one could almost feel how much you care and love this person. The imagery was quit nice to begin with as each line gave new meaning and depth to the passage.

"Though time and distance separate
her energy invades my every sense,
intoxicated, enveloped, consumed
lust and desire impossible to satiate."

This was probably my favorite line in the entire poem as first off it was the introduction which you basically summed the entire poem up in these first four lines. The second thing I like is the third line how you described how she makes you feel which just painted emotions all over. Wonderful job. Good job and keep writing.