The Leaves of Winter

Hey Nik,

Thanks for the suggestions on my poem. :] I usually read all your new ones; I just haven't been in a mood to comment lately. But since you did mine, it's only fair that I did yours, right? Haha. Mkay. Here I go.

I love this poem, mostly because I love winter-time and poems written about this time of year. There's something really beautiful and lonely about this season that I think a lot of people pick up on in their poems.

This poem about a lost loved one definitely fits into the season. They love you have for them and the hope you have that you'll someday see them again plainly shows through your words. I like how you don't beat around the bush, and it's so straightforward. Your poems are always a pleasure to read, Nik. :]

Your shape has changed
and you will never be the same
again.

-- I love this part. I love how you used the word "shape" here. It actually makes me think of a kaleidoscope and all the different colored shapes changing, which is beautiful. This poems is filled with saddness but in a beautiful way that makes it where you can't help but love the poem.

Great job, Nik!

Cayce. :]

The title captivated me and actually, I was took by surprise as I read on. The verses were so heartfelt and I loved reading your thoughts and how you will always remember, although he left you. Wonderful flow and a striking touch to the heart. Thank you greatly for your comment on my latest poem, I always love to hear from you and your kindness.

God bless and keep writing also!

MaryAnne

This was a great poem, emotional and great imagery, although not the traditional rhyming that im used to i really enjoyed this, it flowed very nicely =]

Congrats it was a winning poem no doubt. Loved it

Congrats on winning a share of first place. Leaves of winter, do change with time. They are born of leaves of spring, summer, fall, each season giving them a new and different look, ever changing.