Little soldiers

by Nicko   Nov 12, 2010


Be it childish scribbling
Crafted, stylized or mere black ink
Typed little soldiers in perfect uniform
That run, skip, across an endless plain
Creating sumptuous feasts of verb and noun
Colluding to tempt, taunt, tantalize
Or freshly torn in brutality, ugly and brash
A cacophony of meanings and sounds
Some whispered softly to tickle our ears
Others burst, resound, distract our mind
As upon so many leafs, they scurry away
Expectation, I turn the page.

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  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hey, Nicko, this is superb! Glad to come across this beautiful write from you. I absolutely love the creativity and ingenuity that flows out from this piece. Added to favorites.

  • 12 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    I like the choice of words..and the flow of the poem..words are strong..deserving enough to win..5/5..well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by momopixie18

    I understand why this is a WIN :]
    i got lost in the words, great way of describing!

  • 13 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    Quite extraordinary. I loved every bit of it. Wish there was more to it, so I could've drowned in its brilliance a little longer. (:
    5/5

    Congratulations on the win.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lu

    Congrats on your front page win, very much deserved !

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