It's All Over

- i really like your writinq , your one of my favourites , i can feel the emotion in your writinqs .
keep it upp[:

Yet another sad write for us to read. It all seems hopeless and feels miserable when we have tried and give our best to make something last and just to see it all go to waste...hope you are okay..?

Can really feel the frustration and sadness in this piece Austin. It's a truely emotional poem that you have penned for us that captures the despair felt when we have tried, done our best too make a relationship work but to no avail. You're a great poet Austin :) and a an even greater person to know! Things will get better for you, coz you deserve the best :)

Well written and expressed poem, Lolz.. Olwin

Such a heartbreaking tale I often hear about. Everyone suffers from heartbreak at some time in their life and it's very hard to handle. I can tell that you struggled with this piece. Although your emotions were storng and steady the flow was a bit off in places. But other than that nice job. Nik

Austin
So much pain and dispair in this poem :(

Washed up and forgotten
amid the sandy beaches,
overlooking my shady reflection;
deception and neglection
stares back at me.

It is so painful when we are decieved by someone.

Did I try too hard?
Was I wrong for what I did?
Is this truly the end-
mend and send
these sorrows away then.

Even more painful when our feelings aren't returned in the same way. Doesn't mean you were wrong.

Endings never turn out good
so why should I wait for mine,
as the sun breaks the horizon
I cry, and stop trying,
in frustration and confusion.

Never stop tryng . One day you will find your happy ending. and the frustration and confusion will disappear.
Great job!
*hugs Cindy