Picture-Perfect

by Melissa   Jan 6, 2011


I saw them there-
your words framing you,
a flawless silhouette
of disheveled poetry

Your swerve
tempting me to bend
with its linguistic venture,
through opaque imagery

I abandon my composure
and follow way-
the curve of your spine
binding me
to possibility

I could lie here
for quite some time really,
nuzzle up with your thoughts,
and clumsily catch stars
in the navel
of your poem

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  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Oh.. man.. I am a bit angry that I did now know you had new poems :P but well I been off a little..so I will forgive you.

    however again you know how to move my thoughts from east to west, and I like also share Myryn's feelings :P.

    nevertheless your wording is perfect with waaay original expressions that shakes me very well and inspire me to write new poems.

    I wonder if I nominate this, will it win like what happened with the previous one :P I am good luck. we'll see

    5/5

    never cease to amaze us ok

  • 13 years ago

    by The Queen

    Now why do I have a feeling that this was written in response to someone's poem I had commented a while ago. lol

    Well what can I say, beautifully spoken, as always :)