To depths unreached

You cup the fire of February,
^Oh I loved this! At first I was like why is she associating fire with February haha, then I read on and realize it represents sensuality... honestly you have a nice thought here, I like the metaphor, it's great.

Great ending,. Very thought provoking.

Oh wow..as usual amazing poetry..I love your wording...I love your feelings and your style.
however

Chasing evening star,
you cup the fire of February

^^this is a very catchy opening..
an opening that's for me and my taste..
sounds pretty strong

watching sensuality
rise to such heaven.

^^^
this is absolutely creative, and just
magical..i LOVE it..

With eloquent eye
and senseless sight
(senseless doesnt realllyy fit here
for me..)

I glance freely,
at my guardian
from a rose's lip.

^^
the comma should be after guardian..no need
for it after freely. And omg..what a mind do u hold over your shoulders? you have a dangerous imagination lol..be aware .AMAZING

Breathe me dusk
(something is not here ??
or am I hallucinating lol..umm are you
giving a command or wat..i think you need to
review this :)..if no..then sorry)

Closing lines:
were just as amazing as ever in the previous poem..you are really talented..
I voted the other 2 new poems after reading them..and will comment when i wake up..
keep the good work!!

5/5
keep writing; a great contribution to p an q; you are.