Transformation.

This poem interested me from the start. I love mythology and I got that from this poem. It was intriguing the way you mentioned characteristics of a shape-shifter and gave different animals in order to symbolize a different meaning. The contrast between the whale and wolf captured my attention, two creatures so different. This poem reminded me of two different personalities. Almost like wearing a comedy and tragedy mask. Perphaps this wasn't your attention but that's what I gathered from it and that's what makes a good poem, when somebody can write something and capture the audience on a whole other level. This was again filled with creative metaphors.

Pleasure to read.
-Mel

Oh I loved this poem;
very meaningful..

opening lines lost me a bit, since u separated the 3rd line from "a wolf.."
but then it worked well when i reached the line;

amazing! as a result

or perhaps like paradise,

when I am a whale
staggering alongside shores
of palm trees yet

^^^
fantastic image ! I adore this part, was very fresh and i loved the idea of it,..i love how
you are describing yourself..seriously this poem is perfect..but hey hey hey didn't u just tell me
about the question mark when not asking a real question huuuuhh so

overcoming death from
disintegrated emotion?
^^
yes young lady..take it off :P

I rebirth with beauty
each time I transform
yet never straying
from my actual being,
^^
how meaningful!!..how inspiring!
how flowing and well said...
you just wrote something seriously perfect this time and clear.

I love the ending, not very special since we hear it a lot, but definitely effective

5/5