Its Not Clear Anymore

Although I'm not too sure about your choice in some of your words, this poem as a whole is very deep. Your anger and confusion flow out of every stanza so well. The feelings in here need not be stressed with strong vocabulary, but maybe with simpler words, to make the feelings more to the point.
Altogether, well done.

Hey,

This poem is very bitter and emotional. You can feel every word expressed in this poem.

Its not clear anymore
My emotions have become ambiguous,
and so has my love for you
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This stanza - so blunt and direct.

I love it

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I love it, so full of emotion..great piece ;) 5/5

This is really sad :( and you can really feel your emotions jumping from the page.

I love how the words flow into each other :)
5/5

This poem moved me. It full with emotion and was a very tender piece.