A Cold Breeze

by believeinlove87   Sep 2, 2011


A cold breeze rushes past me,
sending chills down my spine,
feeling a presence,
thinking that I'm alone,
but feeling someone watching me,
knowing that someone else is here with me.

The lights flicker on & off,
the TV channels changing,
i hear giggling up in the attic,
footsteps running down the stairs,
items moving from there original spots,
thinking am i imagining this,
or is it really happening.

Hello i say,
is anybody there,
the hair on the back of my neck stands up,
my arm tingles,
feeling a hand grab my arm forcefully,
pushing me against the wall,
hearing no you're not alone,
this has always been our home.

Speechless,
she tries to calm down her heartbeat,
closes her eyes,
takes a deep breath,
and says how long have you been gone for,
100 years he replies,
walking away she doesn't care there here,
as long as her mind can stay in peace.

A cold breeze rushes past me,
sending chills down my spine,
feeling a presence,
now knowing someone else is here,
sharing the house,
lost spirits not able to find there way back.

-trying something different(:-

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  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Thank you girl(:
    Loveeeee you <3

  • 12 years ago

    by LOvEiSNotFoREvER

    Omg!!! i felt every word...its mystery,darkness,,soo goodd...one of your best poems yet!!!!
    100/100

    cuz 5 is too little to describe it
    LOVED iT!!

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    That is amazin the image you set here is astounding. ... i loved the story. .. i loved the wording i loved it all amazing job x

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Thank you Girly(: Love you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow.... very goood i got scared just reading it
    A cold breeze rushes past me,
    sending chills down my spine,
    feeling a presence,
    thinking that I'm alone,
    but feeling someone watching me,
    knowing that someone else is here with me.

    i felt chills just reading it .... loved it girl :) :) :) 5/5