Memories of the Beach

by believeinlove87   Sep 7, 2011


Looking at the waves in the ocean,
one collapsing onto another,
feeling the sand beneath my toes,
looking at the beautiful clear blue sky,
I feel at peace for once in my life.

My mind is clear,
as the breeze flows around my body,
giving me the slightest chill,
picking up a fragile sand dollar,
taking me back to the days as a little girl,
walking the beach with my mom,
trying to find the perfect one.

A grin grows across my face,
as I giggle to myself,
reminiscing about the past,
on this beautiful beach,
playing in the waves,
getting knocked down repeatedly,
but loving every second of it.

Looking at the waves in the ocean,
I see my family & I in the water,
splashing one another,
trying to find the perfect sand dollar,
looking up at the beautiful clear blue sky,
memories of this beach,
embrace my thoughts,
as I watch the waves crashing into one another.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    This poem is so good. i was in beach side few months ago. i should have written this poem. but you wrote it. i really liked and enjoyed this poem. this poem really makes me feel happy. and i felt i was in beach once again. everything is so clear.
    i like when u said about blue sky. its good. i have nominated this poem for a weekly contest. good luck :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    A calming affect is how this piece feels. Done very well with a nice flow and content. The imagery was vivid, I'm ready to go to the beach:-)

    Connie

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I feel at peace for once in my life.
    - this is my favorite out of favorite part :)
    the poem was emotional i felt happy and sad at the same time reading it. great poem girl... i love the ocean and this poem says a lot i love it :) great job :) :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    I really like the imagery of this poem, you did a really good job describing this 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    My mind is clear,
    as the breeze flows around my body,
    giving me the slightest chill,
    picking up a fragile sand dollar,
    taking me back to the days as a little girl,
    walking the beach with my mom,
    trying to find the perfect one

    my fav ... this was amazing i loved the idea and i somtimes stand on the beach feeling the breeze thinking of the times of the past amazing hol .... i new you would be good at everything not just sad :D 5/5

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