Another Winter without you

by Boy   Sep 17, 2011


Dear love winter is coming soon
Taking off the green stuff of branches
Covering grey clouds on the moon
Changing the color of all ranches

I have to befriend the cold breeze.
Bringing with them unknown calm voices
Making bright surface into ice and freeze
Taking away from me all desired choices

Dear love this time I will miss you again
When I will visit near special places
While walking smoothly in the rain
Will not see you among other glad faces

This time that would not be easy for me
By accepting your virtual presence
Under those white and tall trees
Fearful, not to feel our love fragrance

Dear love hoping to see you this time with me
Like every season I been trying to do
And making myself finally pain free
Sweetheart, its all because I love you.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jess

    Everyone Has Pretty Much Said IT All.
    Overall This Is A Beautiful Poem.
    Great Job.
    5/5
    -Jessi:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow... Took my breath away very good poem I loved it and terrific wording very nice and I enjoyed reading it :) :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow the people before me have said the majority of what I was thinking. But they failed to point out that your length was nice, your word choice was wonderful, and your presence is very clear in this piece. There is a but of a flow, which is nice. The story is sweet and sad. Your beginning is strong, your end is even more so. I love this piece and think it most definatly is worth a 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I suggest you to take poetess^s suggestions, i have some but cant go on details before?monday, as i said from phone...however this is very sad, emotional, very creative and i love that you ryhmed it...an excellent poem with some editions, so afteer aaallll this time not writing..BE PROUD

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I agree with poetess

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