Five Last Words(Kinda Long)

by believeinlove87   Dec 5, 2011


Found in her hand,
a crumpled up letter,
saying her five last words,
" You did this to me."

Arriving into her school parking spot,
opening her car door, looking into the next window,
lays her boyfriend and best friend in a heavy
make out session, tears fill her eyes as she
throws her book at the window,
looking up, eyes bulging out their heads,
she quickly runs away.

Chasing after her, Yelling her name,
she stops dead in her tracks, anger fills her body,
turning around, she says, You & Her? How could
you betray me like this? Wasn't I enough for you?
backing away she shakes her head, saying
You're dead to me, you hurt me for the last time.

Sitting in class, looking at the time,
8:00am, knowing her parents left for work,
she can't handle this feeling, the two most important
people in her life betrayed her in the worst possible way, she goes home,
& silently whispers goodbye to this world.

Writing her five last words,
she takes herself out of this life.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Crimson

    Beautiful i love 5/5 keeping going love this so much

  • 12 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Beautiful, yet sad, and it happens more times than not. kudos to you for this, a 5/5 indeed, keep writting, and I'll keep reading.

  • 12 years ago

    by anonymous

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  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

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