Despair

by Sunshine   Dec 25, 2011


From now on, you aught to pay attention to
a very important scene in our funny drama
while you play the ignorant man, who wears stupid pride
behind his pencil marked smile, I, won't be the lady in red
waiting at the window with her nerves on fire-
not anymore, at least.

I honestly will be the ignorant woMan,
who doesn't care anymore,
if you care or not.

However, keep smiling!

by: Rania Moallem

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  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    It would be hard to see how the passion of this poem would not bring a smile in spite of any despair reflected.

  • 13 years ago

    by RSJ

    Such a massive burst of emotions in a very short poem.

    I'm deeply impressed.
    superb.
    nominated

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Yeah I can definitely feel thee emotion and it's a really good poem I enjoyed reading it :)

  • 13 years ago

    by L

    Okay, Uhmm this piece is .. Bemusing to me.
    I started reading and I enjoyed the flow, the words, and the tone, then I was lost. I re read it again and the same. So I guess I'm not ready for this piece.
    I have no idea what this is about. So this is one of the pieces where I have to comeback and read another day.

  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    You always pen poems with style.
    Originality and strength,
    Awesome

    Lady in Red (SCARLET WOMAN)

    Fabulous piece

    mwah
    xxxx

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