What about now?

Wow..my genious..evry single word of dis poem is js prfctly placed..fp

I wanted to say.... that is such a reminiscent poem filled with anguish and concealed melancholy.

Whatever happened to
we can do it all....

^ It's great quoting the lover, reminding him of the promises/vows you made together. With this you'd be subliminally telling him: you're a liar.

we've nailed falling in love
but somehow we've been caught up
in words that we failed to breathe in-

^ My favorite part!!!! so smooth, it went... yet I can hear the sadness dripping from your tone.

can it truly be too late for us?

^ questions spice the feelings up. great step.

I've asked you time again

^ I can't understand the structure here. maybe 'times' without 'again'.. or 'ago' without 'again'?

to never let me go.....
and you always seem to test my limits.

^ Interesting thought.

How about now
to try to withdraw my heart?

^ A question.. amazing way to end a poem.

Great short piece MaryAnne. Keep writing like them:)