Tangled

Such simple outstanding portray of rocky r/ships. Straight to the point. This is a tangling poem with the ball in your hands. Shoot to the net thus scoring or retrieve and bail out of the match. I like the simplicity of your craft, gives an edge of daring bravery to the subject. Keep rolling the ink on paper..., Jazakallahu Khairan. Blessings shweety... ;-).

Wow!!! damn creative attempt must say... awesome it is, a definite 5/5 :)

That's definitely worth a nomination, I love the feeling, i love the emotions and oh how i love the way I can relate to this, like most of everyone else, i guess!

I Love the way you ended this, great wording, very creative!

Men are weird tho, i dont know why they love to us "tangled" lol :) it's very hard to be stuck and not being able to know whether you leave..or stay. oh man you knew id like this, and you were right. well done!

Wow! I'm speechless... this poem is amazing! I love the structure and the creativity behind it! The title was also perfect for it... you're tangled in this love mess and don't know what to do!

I love the 'Love' tangled part... it had so much meaning... I also like the falling part... and the way you structured your words and the periods so even the reader can feel the idea of falling...

"Pull me up closer;
or simply cut the
string. "

>> the ending was simple and straightforward... I like that! I don't think it's fair for someone to drag someone along, when they're not sure if they want them etc.. it's either they fully commit or let go, because it's just unfair.

Great job with this poem! Love it!!!

Very nicely written indeed. The heart of the matter was addressed and I liked the way it came out. Great job.