Staircase To Heaven(acrostic)

by believeinlove87   Jan 20, 2012


Silently waiting for my dad
To reveal the news of your death,
Anxiously tapping my fingers on my knee,
I hope its not what I believe hes gonna say,
Rambling on and on to myself saying this
Can't be true as you let me know she has passed
Away, almost instantaneously tears
Start spilling out my
Eyes like a never ending waterfall.

Taking a deep breath, trying to calm down my
Overbearing nerves, feeling piece after piece of my

Heart tragically breaking apart, wishing I was able to
Enter your body reviving you back to life, to take
Away this suffocating pain in my chest, feeling this
Vibe overcome my body that you aren't in pain anymore,
Endlessly wishing I could take a staircase up to heaven
Needing to be able to see you one last time.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Awww this is so sad
    I can feel the pain u went threw jus by reading the poem... it was powerful

    Amazing 5/5 frm meee sweetie <333

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    OMG !!

    I felt like I am standing right beside you when you heard it. You wrote it in a way that the reader can feel exactly what you felt. So powerful and deep.

    One of my favs from you.

    Keep it up sweetie :)

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Wow so..powerful... I almost felt like I was dealing with the death right along with you. Powerful.emotions and this is my favorite stanza:
    "Heart tragically breaking apart, wishing I was able to Enter your body reviving you back to life, to take Away this suffocating pain in my chest, feeling this Vibe overcome my body that you aren't in pain anymore, Endlessly wishing I could take a staircase up to heaven."

    Sorry... My droid won't copy the last line; I'm not sure why that is, but it's annoying. -.-

    5/5

    -Heather

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