Pain.....

It's beautiful... so is pain
I love it 5/5

-X

A very inclusive poem, but i feel it needs something to round it off not quite sure what. other than that its captivated to the readers thoughts :)

5/5

This is tragically beautiful. Great job.

5/5 :)

A very sad poem yet very emotional good job girl :)

The flow was so awesome until the last part why did you change it, it was going along so smoothly and then the last part came. it was like you were trying to get fancy. don't do that keep it simple like a john lennon song. remember this is only one opiion don't let me change anything you think is right or better im just talking about me.but ni hope i can be honest and help you in the end. i have change some things about my poems and i also said bite me i like it so you do whAT you like but i still think something happen that change this poem at the end