Can't you see....

by Rihanna   Apr 1, 2012


Can't you see the
pain within me is
killing me

can't you see the pain
behind my eyes
the tears
i'm holding Inside

the pain that
i'm not showing

maybe if you looked
harder you will see
this girls pain
she's been hiding
secretly...

look harder and
hold my pain
be happy, for
your not going insane

feel my pain
hear my screams

watch my life slowly
slip away from me

Each and evey day...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    The feelings are heartfelt and real. I would suggest you not capitalise all letters coz i see that its a continuing line but you have capitalised the first letter. That removes the flow of the poem. Also, i would sugget you include commas where necessary so that it flows even better. I loved the message behind his piece, well written babes. Though sad, i hope you keep on being strong,
    Paul-G

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    The feelings are heartfelt and real. I would suggest you not capitalise all letters coz i see that its a continuing line but you have capitalised the first letter. That removes the flow of the poem. Also, i would sugget you include commas where necessary so that it flows even better. I loved the message behind his piece, well written babes. Though sad, i hope you keep on being strong,
    Paul-G

  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    This is such a good poem!
    the emotion was amazing, and the flow was good! 5/5 again!

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Very good! i usually hide my pain with a smile or just telling people im ok but sooner or later you break down :/ this is great! i love it!

    5/5 :]

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Beautifully written with a deep sadness. It's easy to hide our feelings and thoughts and then it's hard when few people want to listen or understand, but it will get better in life, just take it day by day.....there's always people we meet who are that one special friend to "see" our pain :]
    keep writing!

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