This Is What You Do To Me

by CathyButterflyJC   Apr 30, 2012


This Is What You Do To Me

Ripped me into a thousand pieces with a demon smile
Scattered them all over a mile
Then you burn me lovely in a recyclible fire
Make me see the secret liar
Turn my stomach inside out
Show me what hurt is all about
Take a gun and shot my chest
Never put this bleeding to rest
Leave I mess
Of broken pieces
Desert a heart
For me to fix
Hidden knives
You stab me with
In my depth are cast out dreams
You ripped me apart at the steams
At the start I was half
You made me whole
Then whipped me
And tore me apart
And are still whipping my heart
Arrows threw my flesh

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  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Very sad and emotional piece, like the flow of it

  • 12 years ago

    by Drawing a Blank

    In my depth are cast out dreams
    You ripped me apart at the steams

    I really liked that part

    and this poem is awesome!...Well, you know, in a devastating sort of way. It's so sad! Like this line;

    At the start I was half
    You made me whole

    It just comes to show that the more the one you love has to build you up, the more they have to tear you down with. :(

    Great Write, hon!

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Wow I like the raw emotion in this poem. . . its a very painful piece . . . and its sad but I hope you are okay :( good poem. .

  • 12 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Okay ilove the imagery and the deep raw emotions there! oh btw u have some minor errors but then again when ur emotional that happens but over all i say it's awasome darling! :)

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