While You Were Sleeping

by ChrisT   May 4, 2012


Babe I know you're asleep but I have something to say to you so in the morning you will know how I feel tonight....

I fall to sleep with a smile,
Just picturing you with me tonight.
Even though our distance is a long mile,
I know that this feeling I feel is right.
I can feel your heart beat,
Even now as I fall to sleep.
Our hearts together is a song on repeat,
A sweet rhythm I hope we always keep.
My love, do you feel what I say?
Your touch brings me to my knees.
Just the thought of our someday-
Puts my every worry at ease.
I fall to sleep tonight,
Thinking of you,
Because our love is so right,
And so true.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Alyssa Rianne

    So beautiful

  • 13 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Isnt it amazing how the love of someone can inspire the soul. I can see how much you love her in the honesty of this poem. great job

  • 13 years ago

    by Amber

    This is a wonderful poems very well written

  • 13 years ago

    by Faith Ann

    Very cute

  • 13 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    My Sun and Stars,

    As I read this, it sounded like a song in my head. These words are beautiful, it truly brought tears to my eyes.

    "I can feel your heart beat,
    Even now as I fall to sleep.
    Our hearts together is a song on repeat,
    A sweet rhythm I hope we always keep.
    My love, do you feel what I say?"

    This stanza. To answer, yes, everyday I feel what you say. I loved this one though. This poem, I love how it rhymes, it just flows so musically.
    I cried.
    I loved it. I love you. <3

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