Out The Door, You Kicked Me To The Floor

by CathyButterflyJC   May 10, 2012


Some of the words in here were worse on my orginial but I changed them no matter how made I had been to cause myself to put the swear words in, I don't use those words, and I try so hard to never say them, so I changed them, I'm surprised I got so angry to use them in the first place for a the orginial

"It's easy for you to suckin say."
You've never had feelings that got in the way.
"You never gave a crap about me."
You've never had dreams of what love could be.
"You walk away when thing get tough."
You've never been beaten by things so rough.
"You don't know the pain you put me through."
So I wouldn't be talking if I were you.
"You tell me to move on."
But you don't know how it feels.
"You've never had your greatest hopes become gone."
When all your dreams are peeled.
"Shut up you jerk."
You were always such a flirt.
"I trusted you."
I love you.
Out the door.
You kicked me to the floor.
"You don't know what real love is."
"You don't know about any of this."
"I was by your side through it all."
"But you wouldn't bother to call."
Now I'm lost against the wall.
Of memories.
And all that came to fall.
"I believed everything you had to say."
But then you deserted me one day.
"So what do I have to show for it?"
"All this pain."
"You stabbed me
And threw me in a pit"
Love use to exist.
Why can't you hold me like this?
Like the promises.
And you I miss.
"I hope you're happy now."
Even though I didn't know how.
One could cause so much darkness.
"Just say so if you want to put our friendship as well to rest."
"So many times you push me down."
"You use to show me I belonged."
But now you make me want to leave town.
And everything feels so wrong.
"And I'm sorry I can't stay strong."
When everything I loved is gone.
"Made me feel like more to make me feel like less."
"You think it's fine to make me clean up the mess."
"Fine walk away."
"You never loved me."
"You never wanted to stay."
"Stab me with that knife."
"Take away my life."
You always show me the real bite.
Always make me want to give up the fight.
"Sling an arrow threw my chest."
You get happiness
And I get all the rest.
"I hope she causes you to break."
"I hope she cuts you deep."
I hope she makes you forever bleed.
"I hope she hurts you like you hurt me."
"Happy I'm shattered."
And I'll stay this way forever.
I thought you had intentions to stay.
But instead you threw our love away.
Revealed lies.
Love was only your disguise.
"Forget this too like everything else."
"Boy do you ever love goodbye."
!!!
And then I run out to cry.

PS. Tell me how to get back to paradise with you

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  • 11 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Been there, done it, amazing write 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Special K

    You produce some much emotion with these words. Anger, frustration, hurt ect. I love everything about this even though it's a sorrowful poem, keep writing please!

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Awwwww sweety i can feel the pain soo bad im soo sorry! ican relate to that poem! and the wording is very nice! :) sad tho and i would cry but im kinda shallow and won't cause it would ruin my makeup lol

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    Hmm
    this is written in anger that is so clear
    but it isnt so bad
    there is a flow and emotion though the flow was dropping at some parts but it was there
    this isnt the best you can do in writing
    to be honest i didnt like it as much as i liked the ones be4 it
    still kinda good work in it
    keep writing =)

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    If a heart get hurt deeply, it is not easy
    to be restored. Sometimes it will stick
    forever.