by Unknown May 19, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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Jet black hair, |
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So many people would love a poem like this for a wedding |
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Oh this is a cute little piece! I particularly love the end verse. It flowed very nicely and had lovely rhyme. |
by average thoughts
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Short and sweet..and rhyming and flow ws perfct..grt work hannah.. |
by Unknown
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Thank you! :) |
by BlueJay
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A very simple piece, but I enjoyed it a lot. It was a refreshing piece, yet had some "taste" to it if you will. I love the descriptions and the voice wrapped up in the light cheerful tone; excellent. |
by Unknown
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Thanks! |
by Yrem Crish
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I love this piece..so amazing and awesome imagery. Really impressing..keep writing:)) |
by Unknown
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Thanks!! |