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by Hannah Lizette Oct 6, 2018
Wine trickles down an hour glass,
coating a desert of run-on sentences
that falls upon deaf ears.
(I mentioned once before that heart strings break easier than bones -
yet the pain remains the same.)
You backslide into repeat regrets and biohazard apologies -
I'll pocket your words,
use them for another muse for another time.
You question my internal injuries and for a moment, I thought of being honest... but six words were all I managed to muster out -
"I'm fine, just tired. Thanks though." © Hannah H. 2018
by Em (marmite)
Judging comment: Selective Hearing by Hannah Lizette points 7 - great usage of words and metaphors which really did grip me - I will add that I apologize for such a short comment but this piece fascinated me
I can only shadow what everyone else has said
by CJ Maleney
Only just seen this.
This is rather special and added to favourites
by Dagmar Wilson
I have always enjoyed your poetry and I absolutely love this one. Goes in my favorite. All the very best Hannah and again glad to have you back
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