I would touch the sun and burn my soul
And when am dead i would still be bold
Death would be sweet and even just for you
As i taunt it fearlessly like a bullfighter and his bull
I liked this stanza. I felt the ryhming in stanza 1 were kinda forced. A poem doesnt necessarily have to rhyme but apart from that, saw no problem with it and you have written another amazing poem that i really liked. The emotions you convey are wonderful and so are the words you have used. This is really a beautiful love poem.