Purple Tree

Awesome, I was intrigued by the title, as I had no idea what the poem would be about and was surprised to read this but glad I did as it was very well written and a lot of powerful words were used. i liked the layout of each stanza too, this worked well to break it up.

Very creative poem, well done.

This is lovely, Rania. One of my favourites from you.

Such simple imagery. The repetition and listing adds to a feeling of helplessness and sorrow. The purple tree image is strange but wonderful. I wasn't keen on the elipses because it slowed the poem down, and I don't think it added anything.

I think you've developed a lot as a writer, and whilst I wasn't a fan of all your previous work, you're not afraid to say what you want to say. Some of your work is beautiful and bashful, others are strange and chaotic. Glad to see your work again!

This is quite different, but I absolutely love it.

Haha! I have to agree with Yaki lmao. I love how you incorporate colours and kitchen stuff with your emotions. Just creative. ;D

Great imagery, a good pace to the poem, I hate poems that leave you tongue tied and you stumble on the words. This does neither, Everything is artificial, it is amazing how much co exists with superficial. good stuff. regards.