My dream after she left

by Khalid   Jun 30, 2012

Lonely, recollecting remaining shreds leaves of my sorrow

I couldn't find anyone who offers me solace in plights

She was the one who left me without any excuse

Perhaps she found some other better than me

But with my faith I'll be patient and wait

and I will not betray my 'Covenant'

So will I, who always used to do

And I'll never ever change

Ultimately, and after all

I had a very nice sweet dream of

being fishing with plenty of catch bumpers

where the waves were breaking on rocks of memory

eroding and removing surface layer of precipitated sorrow

relieving all the unveiled moments of longing and buried love

whose wind of tenderness was loaded with fragrant forget

of abandonment and folding all the pages of despair

planting seeds of hope she'll come back

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  • 8 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Sad still beautifully written poem, touches the heart if you let it :) Awesome

    • 8 years ago

      by Khalid

      Thank you my friend!

  • 8 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicelly Penned!!!

    • 8 years ago

      by Khalid

      Thank you my friend

  • 8 years ago

    by Karla

    Beautiful piece Khalid.I loved the format.

  • 8 years ago

    by mandy

    Absolutely amazing write, 5/5.

    "planting seeds of hope she'll come back"
    - Great last line, was this in the form of a vase?

    mandy :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Khalid

      Thank you Mandy! Oh yes! I made the poem in the form of vase. Also, I've a quote dated 13/05/2012 concerning that. You can see it and give yr opinion! Thank you.