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by Khalid Jun 30, 2012
Love, romance /
Lonely, recollecting remaining shreds leaves of my sorrow
I couldn't find anyone who offers me solace in plights
She was the one who left me without any excuse
Perhaps she found some other better than me
But with my faith I'll be patient and wait
and I will not betray my 'Covenant'
So will I, who always used to do
And I'll never ever change
Ultimately, and after all
I had a very nice sweet dream of
being fishing with plenty of catch bumpers
where the waves were breaking on rocks of memory
eroding and removing surface layer of precipitated sorrow
relieving all the unveiled moments of longing and buried love
whose wind of tenderness was loaded with fragrant forget
of abandonment and folding all the pages of despair
planting seeds of hope she'll come backplease rate this poem
Sad still beautifully written poem, touches the heart if you let it :) Awesome
Thank you my friend!
by Robert Gardiner
Very Nicelly Penned!!!
Thank you my friend
Beautiful piece Khalid.I loved the format.
Absolutely amazing write, 5/5.
"planting seeds of hope she'll come back"
- Great last line, was this in the form of a vase?
Thank you Mandy! Oh yes! I made the poem in the form of vase. Also, I've a quote dated 13/05/2012 concerning that. You can see it and give yr opinion! Thank you.