She is a flower in this dirty world

by Mohan   Aug 5, 2012


In a street with only a single house
There is no street light
Some vehicles parked in front
Red light is the other name for that house

Some girls selling the sex
Sex slaves surviving them with money
One girl forced to serve the sex
She was kidnapped from a beautiful life

Now She is in helpless
No one in this world to wipe her tears
She can't see the kindness from the richers
There is no god in her world

She decided to finish her life within the bedroom
Because she can't escape from it
Now prostitute is the other name for her
She hates this society
Because she can't recover from that life

She is melting
Still she is melting
She have to melt until the absence of sex addict
but i think she is not a prostitute.

She is not dirty
I think she is a flower in this dirty world

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  • 13 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    This is a heartbreaking piece that, I'll agree with Mandy, you have written with 'understanding and beauty'.

    This poem signifies the cruelty and the misfortune within this world. A great underlying message.

    I loved the final lines... they were the most beautiful, but also sorrowful. These two lines gave me the impression that you were in love with this woman.

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    'The street with only a single house'
    you should start with
    'In a street with only a single house'

    'She kidnapped from a beautiful life'
    should be 'She was kidnapped ...'
    'She is in helpless' should be 'She is now helpless'
    'She hate' should be 'She hates'
    'I think a flower in this dirty world'
    should be
    'I think she is a flower in this dirty world'

    I hope I will not offend you. But the problem exsists with the tenses.

    I really enjoyed reading the story. Good luck.

    • 13 years ago

      by Mohan

      Thank you khalid i changed that mistakes

  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    I love the way you wrote this. This is truly a beautiful poem, with understanding and beauty. 5/5

    mandy :)

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