If I could write a letter to me...

I really like this whole stanza

If I could write a letter to me
I would pen the beauty of life
which would assist me
in every walk of life.

It is a great thought of giving yourself knowledge of life. I love it!!

Hi Amreen. :)

Let me start with the fact that I love how you start each stanza with the title. It gives the effect of... you're starting over with a new idea. I really like that.

And the fact that it is a happy poem... giving praise to yourself [when most people would criticize more] is fantastic. It is nice to see a fellow Raven like this! :)

I like the rhyme and all. Good use of vocab as well.

"I would pen the beauty of life" is my favorite line!

Amreen, sweets, I apologise for not reading as much of your writing lately, but on reading this, I vow to read more, because you are beautiful and this piece is so lovely to read, it is a piece of hope and love for yourself, a piece of so much soul and heart...
the flow was flawless, and the rhymes were gentle yet perfect, you are a talent and I;ve always known it, I love your spirit friend, its wonderful, its beautiful, its you

mwah
xx

Very well written I like the concept, a little like a message in a bottle, all the things you wish you could say to your self. It's unusual but I like your style.

I loved your "Letters to me" this brought to mind a journal written with supernatural rhythm. Thanks for sharing