Sword and Sorcery...( Dark Intentions )

by ah satan 666   Nov 25, 2012


Andrea and Jims title toss
Club challege
~*~*~*~

"Here ye,
Here ye"...

Honestly
I bow to
thee...

BUT,

Only
as I'm
about to
sit down!

You swan around on your high steed like the brave
noble, who's honourable presence is worthy of king
Arthur's round table.
I see contradictory to the fact, as your far from
being brave, noble...

"Honourable"...

Well that's a laughing matter!

{ First strike to the heart - hurt }

You make no
decision what
so ever, for
your options
given.
Consumed by

Obsession,

Selfishness,

Greed...

God forbid you
miss out, as to
you the grass
has always been
greener. Leaving
the one who has
always truly
cared... hanging
by a noose.
Praying for the
stool to be
kicked and end
all suffering.

{ Second strike to the heart - realisation }

Whilst you twist
your knife deep,
into a loving
heart. Settling on
the pray, of a
natural selection
in easy and naivety.
Promising excaliburs
great magic... as if
its your divine right.

When in reality,

Sorcery flows on a
hexed web of lies.
The ladies around
you, are in lakes
of there own tears.

Drowning,

as they believed...
you and your
sword were for life.

No longer do I see
your as a jester.
Just a fool...
looked in a self-
induced stock.

{ Third strike to the heart - letting go }

I'll happily cut you
from your binds.
Pass you your sword
of self-righteousness.

Strike me with your
sharpe edge...until
your satisfied you've
made your point.

For my heart is
now drained, and
i bleed only from
a well of ink...

As I've shed your
fables. I now draw
a line across your
throat, as I'm
spilling your truths.

Over your poisoned
sword...I'll take
my noble quill,

watching your
face drain
with colour,
Like you
watched
my soul
drain of
hope.
***
**
*

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Opportunity has come knocking,
my scrolls of torturous past,
will now be heard by the traitor.

December the 1st,
I will be attending a poetry open mic night.
I've been entered in the Dark Arts category lol

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  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "The length of this poem initially intimidated me slightly as often alot of authors struggle to maintain a strong piece for something so long, upon finishing reading however I was both pleasantly surprised and impressed.

    Not once did I find the poem to falter in terms of power or flow and the author manages to create such unique imagery from beginning to end that really allowed me to picture what they were describing. I liked the lines in brackets too, they were like a small verse all on their own, and also managed to add more depth and power to the surrounding lines.

    The imagery was right on par with the subject of the poem and I thought that the author did incredibly well at keeping the imagery, vocabulary and content so dark without turning the piece into bloody gory alone.

    I imagine the layout of the piece took the author some time along with the poem itself and each compliment the other very well.
    This was a wonderful poem"

    :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    Wow.... Just wow. I love your style of writing! You have a wonderful talent, I look forward to reading more

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    GOOOO NATASHAAA!!^__^

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I read it to Jim Natasha... He is a man who truly adores rhyme poetry... whenever I read to him a non rhyme piece his response has always been .. oh that's nice... ect..ect...

    So I read him this piece... and he said WOW!

    looked at me and said.. that piece needs to be nominated... yeah.. you smacked this!

    • 11 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      Thank you both for the title...

      This is my favourite challenge of all... I chew the title and see where my mind takes me haha
      (Usually takes me longer to pick a title than it does to write a piece)

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Yeah...... this one needs nominated... wow!

    • 11 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      THANK YOU GUYS!! :D

      Seriously the little smile emotion on
      Screen doesn't do any justice to what
      you've done to my face or really looks like...

      My cheeks gone red...
      Face is very warm...
      And I have a stupid random giggle with
      Massive smile...

      THANK YOU,
      this write... was for my heart,
      Which now feels honoured by you all <3