Train Tracks (Reverse Etheree)

by Maple Tree   Dec 2, 2012


Walking barefoot, my mother moon stands by,
guiding a cotton whisper slowly
along train tracks to dark nowhere's,
and other places unknown,
she is the spirit guide
holding shaky hands,
breathing comfort
to a soul,
searching
peace

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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Interesting piece,

    A couple walking along the train trails while holding hands and the moon guiding them.

    Romantic scene. Though, I can't help but feel disquieted by it because the couple is walking along the tracks of the train. It indicates danger at least to me.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Great form use Andrea, as always.
    i love the message in this, the serenity and gentleness.
    Such a deepness in the lines.

    love ya
    Xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Wow looooove this poem. Everything about it^_^
    Great job=)

    I'm going to try this form:)

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