Desperate (Haiku)

Haha, this is fantastic (:

Hi there my fellow Aussie!

I read your poetry often but I've been a bit slack in the commenting department. At the moment I have a massive fascination with short poetry so when I saw you had a haiku posted I couldn't resist dropping by to your page.

I must say, I totally didn't expect the last line but it made me smile due to the rawness you presented lol. By raw I mean it was honest and straight to the point. I guess I should learn to expect the unexpected from you huh.

Nice little read for a laugh!
Mel

Lol hehe this made me smile. I think you have a great sense of humor and the fact you can write something amusing is a talent because most poets fail to be funny but you succeed.

5/5

Lol Liz. You're awesome :)

He heheLoveddddd it!