Someone

by FirelightHorse   Mar 23, 2013


I wish someone would understand
The feeling inside me is nothing grand
It drags me down, endlessly
Barely letting me breath, not letting me see.

I need someone, I don't know who
Who can help me on, keep me true

Loneliness is a terrible thing,
No one is there, giving me a ring
Telling me that it's all right
Bringing me in, hugging me tight.

But I haven't told anyone this
How I wish he would give me my first kiss
There is only one problem, as there always is
I don't know him, although I wish I did.

*I just wrote this poem, in this little box. Somehow I made it rime, don't know how. I wanted to express my feelings, so I don't have to keep them for myself. Hope you like it!*

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  • 11 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    Perfect poem. Your genuine longing is the soul of your poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, that was so powerful, it blew me away!!! It sucks to me, wodnerful job with your emotions and feelings, such force from your heart!!! This is soooooo BEAUTIFUL and sad and heartfelt!!! Two thumbs up 100/100 and I want you to know if you need anyone to talk to, I'm always here, and I'd be happy to help and listen!!!

    • 11 years ago

      by FirelightHorse

      Thank you very much! I am glad you like it!

    • 11 years ago

      by FirelightHorse

      Thank you very much! I am glad you like it!

    • 11 years ago

      by FirelightHorse

      Thank you very much! I am glad you like it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    Writing as it comes to you for me is the best way to write. Good job

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