Nameless (Acrostic)

Amazing piece Meme!

It pains me to read that people hurt themselves over other people. Making the suffering they caused permanent.
I wish I could erase those scars and prevent them from ever getting there.

Wow... What an intriguing poem Meme! I got goosebumps while reading this poem... it was filled with raw and dark emotions. You penned it perfectly... I really enjoyed it!

I like the annonymity of your title (hope my spelling is correct haha)

Never mind the scars that were
abandoned on every inch of my skin;
mending them will never help me to
erase the person he made me be.
Lifeless; I dragged my aching body to
escape his tormenting touch, but he
still marked me then left me only as a
strayer from the girl I once used to be

I know you like honest critique but....I can only offer one suggestion because this was just so very well written that I'm struggling right now...ok..

abandoned on every inch of my skin;
^^^
Can't remember what that little thing at the end of this sentence is called but ...I'd replace it with an exclamation mark my skin! Bigger statement IMO?

No other critique to give you this time girly...great poem....

Stunning piece.

I seen this name and almost picked it! lol Great minds think alike. :)

I like that you made this an acrostic, it truly brought out the content of this poem. You feel nameless because of the of the abuse and the way he has made you feel, no longer who you used to be.

Perfect pen! <3